It's pitch black and lonely in here. This box is small and secluded, I was exasperated by the lonelyness. Why was I here, these questions baffled me, well in sithence I was playing Hide and go seek with my brother, but now it's been four hours. And I'm still here, inside this small toy box, the spot I hide ever time I play this game. I'm displeased, no one cares that I haven't been out and about four hours. Unloved and forgotten, they only care about arrangeing a $4000 funeral for my cat who died from panleukopenia, they are unrational they won't spend one measly dime on me and spend $4000 wasted dolars on the cat. I'm apperantly a 'nussence'. So now i'm here, overlying all these things getting ready to decompose, but they are imperishing. They are identing the abnormaly small toy box, th shattered grass shaving the flesh of my back. I feel tingleing inside, the fumes inside here are making me dizzy, toxic fumes equal mutation, oh great! I'm going to me a mutated freak uncounsious in a toy box full of imperishing unkown items. The scent, it was horrid, smells like an Acer negundo, maybe after a couple more hours I'll need some medication like i don't know Haematology the sickly taste of that medicence.
I bet you're wondering why I don't just open the door and crawl out, well to sooth you're overactive little minds someone put a unbreakable ununlockable lock on the lid, I'm stuck like a fish on a hook, nothing I could do but sit here and wait to decompose like the rest on unknown objects in this bin. I was inadmissible to my family, unexcepted or inproper to them, like I was a cat in a pack of wolves. I was rejected by my own mother, my own father! The ones who share my blood.
Hours passed and i'm still here. There's no doubt that I'm going to die, I never knew what I was like to be face to face with death, my fate was determined, all I could do now was wait...
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star #1.) i liked how you used a variety of different words.
ReplyDeletestar #2.) i also liked how you used big words, but they still made sense in your story, it didnt seem like they were just there.
wish.) i really liked your story! but maybe you could add more to it... it left me wanting more! :)