School was coming to an end. Walking up the steep hill covered with dead grass, and pine needles. I could see the blue door just a couple feet away, from behind me a hear the sounds of feet coming towards me, I turned to my left and saw my best friend Sidney sprinting towards me. She wasn't looking like her happy self today, she seemed gloomy and depressed. Her pretty smile was turned into a upsetting frown. Something must have been wrong, I was bracing myself for the news. She reached me and said "I have have some extremly bad new to tell you, i'm moving at the end of the school year"
My bright smile suddenly turned into a frown, our faces looked like twins, tears began to form in the corner of my eyes. I knew it was going to be impossible to hold in the tears. My eyes gently shut, the clear tears dribbling down my face. They were sparklying in the sunlight as they hit my sweater. The wet spots covering my sweater fastly. Sidney wrapped her fragil arms around me, I did the same to her. I slowly tried to stop the tears so i could talk to her. I quietly asked "Wh-where are you moving?"
"Alberta" she responded, the tears dripping down her face made me cry even more. What happens if I was never going to see her again. Would we ever be able to stay in touch? The feeling of loosing her was unbarable, she took a part of my heart with her, that day when she packed up and left forever. I tried to smile, to make the day better, I was goign to try to make the last couple weeks i had with her the best time of my life. I knew when that day came, it would be one of the worst days in my life. So when that day finally came, we said our good byes, the tears rolling down my face. I stand in her drive way as they packed there car, Sidney and I stood there, then we finally hugged, as the whole family hopped into the car. The loud rumble of the engine didn't help stop the tears, my face soaked from all the tears, my lips quivering. Breathing heavly i could hear the sound of her voice saying good bye.
As they drove off into the distance with the dirt forming dust behind their wheels, waved goodbye, and started to walk home. Leaving a trail of tears drops the whole way.
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i like it alot but the ending need to be longer
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ReplyDeletethat was amazing, descriptive and everthing it made me feel like i was you saying goodbye to her.wow
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